Tiny little white rabbit

Happy Holidays

I see a white rabbit

A tiny little rabbit

Many little rabbits

Slowly falling to the ground

On the trees and on the walls

Its on everything but my palm

For when I hold

the tiny little rabbit

It slowly goes away

Oh poor little rabbit

It comes from the sky

and settles on the ground

Okay with being stepped on

Complains without a sound

Would I pity the little rabbits?

Or enjoy through the day?

For when the season ends

They'll be on their way...

Oh tiny little rabbit

tiny little white rabbits

see you once more next season

goodbye little rabbits...

Reviews

[Junction]

Snow falling and becoming tiny little white rabbits. It's alive and makes you want to reach out and touch them. However, you can't because it will melt in your hand. Something you want to just hold and cherish and it disappears before you can.

Sounds familiar to me. Ha....

[Lox]

finally someone sees that the rabbits in this poem signify snow. Others have been saying its weird haha. Thank you yet again!

[V]

I like "weird" writings, too. Interesting. You created a quite good pattern in this one. Though I don't quite understand why you wrote 6 instead of 4 lines in the 2nd stanza.

[Lox]

That's what makes it weird. Haha thank you for the review!

[Cherry]

This poem is kinda weird but i like it.

[Lox]

Weird is good! Thank you, I am surprised the people here actually read the stuff other people write! Unlike the other sites I've been to.

[Cherry]

Someone just wrote something like that tonight I think. i know what you mean though. i think a lot of sites are becoming that way.

[Lox]

Wait, wrote something like what tonight?

[Cherry]

About people who wanted to be friends but didn't review or something along those lines. Sorry i don't remember the name. It was in bold letters

[Cherry]

friend just reminded me of the name. it was hijacker. i think it had more to do with being a top review person.

[Lox]

Top reviewer you mean. Anyways thanks for the review! I Appreciate it.