freedom

freedom

A Poem by Gabby
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we all deserve freedom

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We all deserve freedom,

As the flower deserves the sun,

As the fish deserves the the ocean,

We all deserve freedom,

But some do not always get what they want

© 2010 Gabby


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Posted 15 Years Ago


Nice poem! And it's true, we all do deserve freedom! Loved the way you compared us to needing freedom with flowers needing the sun! It was very cute and I enjoyed reading it! :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this :D

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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