Thunderstorms

Electric lightning

flash. Thunder rumble and roar,

Crack! Sky splits, rain pours.

Reviews

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

A great Haiklu. Well Done!

[DanaRegen]

Short and sweet, very realistic and discriptive. Very nice poem Stella! Thanks for sharing,
-Dana :)

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Very descriptive. Really good

[T. Blake Braddy]

I'm relatively new to haiku, but I have to say this one is very good. In my opinion! I can't successfully carry over words from previous lines, and you've done it seamlessly. Great job!

[Wicahpi]

me personally would take away the 'flash'. it's my own opinion, of course.
otherwise this is wonderfully description in three lines, nicely done.
good luck!

[Anthony Thomas]

A very wonderful description of thunder storms. I love the imagery.

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This is a great haiku! Is this for the contest? I hope you win it :D

[Rhine Wolf]

nice haiko, love thunderstorms too!

Blessed be
Fallon