Your idea is interesting But you present it as a range of statements finishing up with a question I think you could structure it in a better way in order to cath your readers interest Just my ywo cents worth to be accepted or discarde at your choice
A poet who was born and raised in the sunny lands of Mediterranean, now anchored in North, still playing with the words to express her feelings and thoughts. more..
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