In My Arms

Why does the The sun continue to rise, With my love gone? His pale skin glistens In the dawn His strong heart, still Why does the earth Travel in its unnatural path, While he lies in my arms? My worlds ended With his last Gasping breath

Author's Note

i was doing dishes and cut my hand and as i was putting a bandage in my cut it came to me

Reviews

[Jetta Zippora]

Very beautiful and emotional. I love it. Great write, friend. Can't wait to read more of your work. :)

[Frank F. Atanacio]

heart-wrenching romatic write, well penned with that clean crispness that allows the clarity to your sadden soul wow nice write :)

[Dara[DRAMATIC]]

Sad. So very sad. Well-written, I might add!