First Love

A tale of my first(and still only) love.

She was a flower

Fragile with the sun

I saw her like the sun

Beautiful like the sunrise

I looked into her eyes

And saw the colorful winds

The happy little trees

The big basking moon

Of her soul

Insecurities

Acting up

Did not know

The ethics

Or morals

I just wanted to bask

In her sunshine

Nobody cares somehow

When the wasted love

Comes pouring down in a storm

Can’t you see what you have done

With my soul

When you said

No

Author's Note

Well guys, what do you think? Deep enough? Please comment!

Reviews

[Country boy183798]

Definitely a good read, deeply emotional, and feels sincere. Keep up the good work!