Fly

I feel like I'm flying

I can't wait for our first plane ride

when I'll have to hold your hand

because I'm too scared of flying

but I'm more afraid to land.

Reviews

[Owen J Kato]

Good finish, plus it's a very realistic look as I've flown with someone who had to hold my hand because she was afraid. Then I am not sure, you your using flying as love and landing as the reality that falls after say a "honeymoon stage" and I like that, was it done on purpose or was this my interpretation?

[gabiaimee]

The metaphor has a few meanings behind it, and that is one of them.

[Saddam]

Too short but have great meaning. A fine example of a sweet poem.

but I'm more afraid to land.