Burn

I felt my body burn

I never understood how

people could digest burning,

stinging, liquid poison

until I myself consumed

the fire and felt my body

burn.

Reviews

[sinNsincerity]

This takes off in so many directions when I read this... =D

[AaronFreitas]

I like it my friend. Like the format, like the topic :) Addiction and alcoholism are serious and hard for many to overcome. Good job :)

[Elisa]

In so few words, you've summed up the struggle of millions, many of whom say, "That could never happen to me," until they're swept up in addiction. It's so sad, but the scariest part is that it can happen to anyone. Good job

[Robert]

Well done an d the structure of the piece is interesting.

[Saddam]

until I myself consumed
the fire and felt my body
burn.

We are have a flame in us.
It is one of best one of the day.
Great dear.