Precipitation

Rain has nothing on you.

The relief of rain is nothing
compared to the joy of each time I see you.
My lips need yours more than
a drought needs a snowstorm,
but the snow comes much more
often than you.

I'd rather be stuck in the
desert with you than with
snow,
even if the winter is more predictable. 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

The weather and love. Are similar.
"I'd rather be stuck in the
desert with you than with
snow,
even if the winter is more predictable. "
You took the reader to nice place and strong ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Brittany Bostic]

Short but had real feeling. I liked the comparisons.

[zaisham9393]

this is still now the sweetest and most romantic poem ever :)
thanks 4 sharing ;)!

[Saddam]

My lips need yours more than
a drought needs a snowstorm,

It's wonderful and romantic.
Like the use of perfect metaphors.

[Jonny The Savage]

The Romanticism in this piece is rather nice. Of course the metaphor works wonders. Well done.

[Quinn]

Incredible. The whole poem flows amazingly.

I love the metaphor through the poem and brings out strong emotion.
Very well written.