Time Belongs to God

often man who is a creation by God, a warrior a midst his peers on this battle field known as earth, will foolishly worry and stress about the subject of time, Time should be kept in God's hand.

Time Belongs to God

Time fly's by  like lighting strikes

tragedy and war wherever belief in God is inadequate,

crisis arrives impolite.

On the same note If you consider patience as a virtue ,

your subconscious is right!

By standard  and no sight just  a

humbling belief , that Almighty God knows

whats right  24/7 endless wisdom

all days and every night

 whose kingdom is so high only an invite by the son will   

book you a flight.

                                                                           

That makes your life the plane so steer sober, check mirror's and buckle tight

time belongs in God's hands

no angel or humans can

handle  that.

Author's Note

all feedback is welcomed.

Reviews

[bball_41]

Hello! So, I'm here for a review! I hope that this is a helpful and an enjoyable review :). So, yeah here I go.
To be honest I was brought here because of the title. I thought that this would be interesting and nice to read the opinion of someone else.
I do agree with you when you say that time belongs to God. All time is God's hands. I love the way you put it into a poem. This message is one that needs to be heard, and I am psyched that you are doing it the way you are doing it.
While I as reading this a verse went through my mind. It's found in 1 Peter 5: 6. This verse is the one that comes right before the 'cast all your anxiety on him because he cares for you' verse. This verse is what most people focus on, but in context it just adds that much more meaning.
You see the verse before that says, "Humble yourselves, therefore, under God's mighty hand, that he may lift you up in due time." This verse states that God will answer your prayers in his perfect timing. Therefore, cast your anxiety on him. I think that you brought these to verses into a different perspective. If that was not what you were going for, that is what came to mind.
You are an amazing writer with a great message! Keep up the great writing!

Have a great day!

Stay Classy

bball_41

[Wee]

thankyou for taking the time to read and review my work your comment was greatly appreciated, for ppl to read my piece and give credit to the father is my motivation to improve and get better

[Wee]

if they think of anything but God after this piece i have failed in my vision so thankyou very much