ME and YOU

A confused lover finally gets it right...

ME AND YOU

 

As the time ran away,

I watched you turn,

Turn to say…

 

The words you had,

You had in mind,

That made you sad,

And had you blind…

 

Would you be,

Be so kind,

Like you are,

In my Mind…

 

The story of you,

And my life…

 

Bind us together,

Together as few,

You turn the page,

Over to new,

Left me there,

Without a clue…

 

Its just,

Me and you,

As I love,

Love only you,

Its just,

Me and you,

Its just me and you,

Its just me and you…

 

 

God knows why,

You feel damn shy,

I just had to leave,

When you started your cry…

 

I asked those stars,

Why they shine,

When I don’t feel,

Feel that fine…

 

I came across,

Across the sea,

I am in love,

Accept my plea…

 

I was wrong,

When I was gone,

But I am the one,

One you belong…

 

This is the story,

Story of me,

Without you,

There is no me…

 

Let me in,

In your heart,

I’ll get on my knees,

If you want,

Cut me in piece…

 

I want a tale,

Tale of me,

Me and you,

People will see…

 

It would be just,

Just me and you,

No more blue,

When its me and you,

All there is,

There is just,

Me and you,

Me and you,

Me and you…

 

WRITTEN BY-

Gaurav Walia

Author's Note

NOTE:There might be a bit repetitions but still this one is quite close to me...so please ignore the repetitions

Reviews

[Shonali]

me nd ammu;;; wow! its jzt awwwsm..lovely poem.

[Gaurav Walia]

Who's ammu ??

[Shonali]

my life

[Gaurav Walia]

Great...I am happy for you :D

[Shonali]

tnx

[Gaurav Walia]

you're welcome..

[Adri Moolman]

its very good :)

[Gaurav Walia]

Thank u so much

[Shonali]

very nice!!!!!

[Gaurav Walia]

Thanks..

[Shonali]

My pleasure!

[Virtuosa X]

Nicely done. I still think the repetitions are fine.

Love it!

[Gaurav Walia]

Thanks Virtuosa..i appreciate it... :D

[Virtuosa X]

My pleasure! :)

[Just Kim]

Wow, Very nicely written. Love the set up of the piece as well

[Gaurav Walia]

thanks a lot tabbycat ;)

[Anusha Prabhu]

You've been playing a nice game with words :) Enjoyed reading your poem.. WELL DONE!!

[Gaurav Walia]

thank u so much Ms.Anusha..I have also tried some Kavitas (Hindi Poems) as well..i can upload them if u are interested...

[Anusha Prabhu]

Ya sure...Would be my pleasure to read few.. :)

[Gaurav Walia]

great..i'll upload them by tonight... i appreciate it

[Anusha Prabhu]

Indeed.. :)