Awakening

Written in early spring as I gazed at the beautiful world awakening

lavender and pink

garden beauty wrapped in green

perennial charm

 

growth of each new day

awaken dormant spirit

from winter repose

 

lavender heavens

in majestic mystery

paint my springtime sky

 

 

Amazing - in Beauty and Nature Contest

Reviews

[Sirius King]

very nice

[Tommy]

This piece awakens my longing for spring to come, like a fresh breath of its thawing airs. Short but full of imagery. I like the flow, your pen runs like the paint brush of heaven used to "paint my springtime ski."

Vividly Beautiful!
RLG,
Tommy

[Linear]

A poem painted in pastel shades of spring, a new awakening as flowers and blosssom begin to bloom, happy days are back again.

[OT]

very nice!! has an ethereal, dreamy quality - the seasons taking over from each other in "majestic mystery"!! nice extended haiku!! full marks haha!!!