Imperfection

Imperfection

A Poem by Chaos
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Typically me

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Insecurities
Mounting piece upon miserable piece
Balancing my blocks
With the A-B-Cs of all my failures
Ready to topple down

Balancing my blocks
With the A-B-Cs of all my failures
Ready to topple down
Suffocating me
With misguided faith and beliefs

Suffocating me
With misguided faith and beliefs
Are the witnesses
Standing in line to condemn me
For the crime of imperfection

© 2009 Chaos


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I liked this. It was interesting. I loved how you used A, B & C to explain the failures. What a neat concept.
I liked this.

- Kriss

Posted 16 Years Ago


I liked it.
Almost similar to a pantoum poem.

Balancing my blocks
With the A-B-Cs of all my failures

^^I like those 2 lines inparticular.
Reinforcing the message of imperfection.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Chaos

Boston, MA



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