Daughter's Cry

Daughter's Cry

A Poem by Kenneth The Poet

Coffee and honey
and a daughter's cry,

these are things that make
life so superfly,

a bit of leisure
and a round of prose,

a simple rhyme scheme
and now for the close

© 2012 Kenneth The Poet


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You have a slightly new edition to the family...correct? Yes I remember those early mornings...coffee is a must after a sleepless night...but those cries...are heavenly. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Kenneth The Poet

13 Years Ago

Yeah, she is 4.5 months old...an awesome bundle of joy. They are heavenly for sure. Thanks for the r.. read more
Awesome! Brought a huge silly grin to my face as I felt the happiness within you as you wrote this! Love it!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Kenneth The Poet

13 Years Ago

Thanks, Priscilla.
Priscilla Sayers

13 Years Ago

Always a pleasure dear friend!
ta-dah!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Kenneth The Poet

13 Years Ago

Thanks, Ed.
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Heh, nice meta-poetry.

I think the fourth line would read better without the 'so'. I think the extra syllable added by it distends that verse a bit.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Kenneth The Poet

13 Years Ago

All the lines are five syllables, which is why the "so" is there.

Thank you for the rev.. read more

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Kenneth The Poet is an optimist wrapped in the candy shell of moroseness and cynicism. He lives between the two parallels marked 46 and 49, all while living in the state marked 39. He pretends that he.. more..