Commentator

Commentator

A Poem by Kenneth The Poet
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Written in December '23

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a commentator employed by

a network of fairness

and of balance used a

surrogate to have a child

 

and this man swings for

the other team…

 

and his fellow commentators

didn’t give him hell, but the

self-righteous shitheads on

the former bird app…

 

they see him as an abomination

and one that will abuse his children

 

the fearmongering from the past

is still active and present today

 

the depths of hatred toward

people who seek means of

assistance away from the

“natural order” is galling,

appalling and

somewhat enthralling

 

in the way a train wreck

is enthralling

 

but this bigoted bullshit

is just the surface trope

to persecute a minority

within the accepted majority

 

it’s God’s will, according to

these bigoted f***s

 

the prime directive

is not for them,

but for the chosen them

 

the will of God is then

malicious, capricious,

pernicious and to

simply critique that

is downright seditious

 

we are the property

of the creator and

he sets parameters

of conduct that must

be followed, yet if

you don’t, then to

perdition you go

for all eternity

 

just because they wanted

to follow the prime directive,

wanted to have their unique

signatures passed on,

wanted to leave a legacy

in a universe that feels

anything but predestined

 

endless commentaries

have been written about

these subjects…

 

but couldn’t the self-righteous

f***s keep their goddamn

bigoted, bullshit opinions to

themselves and let the

commentator celebrate

in peace?

 

no, wait, they can’t

 

enjoyment isn’t a word

those asshats can comprehend

 

neither is freedom apparently,

the freedom to pursue love

and family without

judgment from others

 

but it’s never that easy

unfortunately…

 

even though it should be

 

live free and die,

and never worry about

what comes after

 

sin is an illness

they sell to further

sell the lie of salvation

 

and that’s something

this commentator

can say honestly

 

© 2025 Kenneth The Poet


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Kenneth The Poet
Kenneth The Poet

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