February Of My Discontent

3-D group exercise: painful events in 30 words or less.

Two blue lines, a third miracle
Altar call, special blessing
Grandfather's death, anger rekindled
Back pain equates to before shock
Scarlet mass now a scarlet mess
So f**k everything metaphysical!!!

Author's Note

February 2011

Reviews

[Teri B]

The beauty of such writing is that it teaches us the patience of the word. Best use of each brings best results in terms of the writer's satisfaction and the reader's delight and appreciation.

You have made me feel your February pain. Nicely done!

[nicolo]

It's like saying f**k you GOD!

[Brad]

i think that last line tied everything up nicely!

[joshua deathdealer]

Great work. I love the title and the scarlet tongue twister.

[NightShade]

Wow! You're not kidding about a painful event. It's a testament to your skill that you evoked such a vivid scene and raw emotions in 30 words!

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

I am turning this one inside out and maybe I shouldn't be. Screw everything to do with reality perhaps?