That Man

I saw that man today,
the strange one who
appears from the ether,
and he brought his friend,
a serrated edge so long
that Rambo would
cower in fear...

Author's Note

A coffee cup story, or poem I guess.

Reviews

[Tim Lion]

ha. ha. yeah, that f****r works on the same boat as I do.

[Crowley]

I have met a few with the serrated edges for sure.....usually full of misplaced passion, but passion is passion nonetheless. Loved it.

[Audrey Howitt]

Scary stuff actually--in so few words---well done.

[Emily B]

it's stunning how limiting the description to these few lines makes the impact so much stronger . . . I'm sure there are folks who could write a novel around that man