Souls On Fire

The knife of insult
cuts the heart rather deeply,
killing all their wills.

Boiling over with
emotional outbursts, red
with rage, much acid.

Setting only their
souls on fire and not the world,
so what else is new?

Reviews

[Abd-afeez]

lol! Thats some funny truth. I just love this short but lovely insight. Thanks for sharing.

[Abd-afeez]

lol! Thats some funny truth. I just this short but lovely insight. Thanks for sharing.

[roarke]

funny, that sounds exactly like how I make clam chowder, the red kind not the white......

[The Analog Kid]

Acid is the perfect word to use here. Nice and short.

[Coyote Poetry]

Made my old mind think with this poem. You open the door to many questions with your words. Insults lead to no-where. Would be nice to hear the truth on occasion. I like the closing line to this poem. A excellent poem.
Coyote