Alone

For my buddies whom i think i've lost!

They've all gone, no more to return..
Am sitting all by myself, empty 'n' alone
Tryin to find things tryin to sing
Smilin 'n' cryin
But no one to smile back... to wipe away my tears.
I'm all alone, with emptiness 'n' fear!
I've lost all hopes... dreams... all...
'Coz they are no where near!

Reviews

[Tina]

Hmmmmm....lovely write, reflects the emotions perfectly. Will like to add what i personally feel - friendship is love,isnt it? So it cannot be one-sided, and also, true love never leaves you, AND, destiny always holds the best for you....so cheer up bud!

[Jam]

Very compact n nicely written.... the emotions are very well portrayed

[W.Piggy]

I think you wrote this beautifully.
It's very sad to loose friends, i hope this isn't true but if it is i want to tell you that it's going to be okay. Sometimes things happen that we don't but those things make us stronger.
Anyways, i think you wrote it very well. I really enjoyed reading it. hehe.
It's short and simple and explains your feelings very well. I like the different small twist to it with your use of words, very unique style.
Keep it up. Great job. (:

W.Piggy.