Boy Oboy!

Boy Oboy!

A Poem by Jorj Jie
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person

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I met him late December
His eyes were but so tender
I hope that he'll remember
He signed that piece of paper.

January came and it was good.
He seem to be in such good mood.
February came,twas hard as wood
He did things I, never thought he would.

In March, I heard he's out of work
I wonder what have popped his cork
I'm feeling like I was stuck with fork
He's gone with my money, that stupid dork.

© 2014 Jorj Jie


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oh that stupid dork!! :))))))))))) i like the sense of humor your protagonist has in closing .. short poem, we've all been deceived and been a deceiver in love, i must say ... pity when the hurt is serious ;(
E.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Jorj Jie

3 Years Ago

Thank you ☺️ Love has a funny way of making us remember things
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This is amazing and your last line made me laugh.
Amazing write

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jorj Jie

12 Years Ago

Thank you. This really did happen to me months ago. I tried to contact that man this morning but his.. read more
Just Kim

12 Years Ago

Sorry you lost money over him. Must've been hard
Jorj Jie

12 Years Ago

Yeah :) , but oh well. Sometimes, it ain't nice to always be nice. Some people abuse our kindness. :.. read more

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Added on April 25, 2013
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Jorj Jie
Jorj Jie

Manila, NCR, Philippines



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I'm not a Professional writer. I just write whatever comes to mind. Sometimes when I am happy or sad or inspired I put it all into writing. So please bear with me :) more..