The Magical Borrower

People who take a loan and disappear without a trace :)

And so, If I am asked to speak

I'd say..you've mastered Hide and Seek.

For when it's time to pay your due

You disappear without a clue.

And when you come to borrow money

You get a YES! your words  are like Honey.

You promise like a Politician.

And disappear like a Magician.

Reviews

[Pax]

wow ~ i say a brilliant take on the subjective conniving people :D ~
I like this line the best:

You promise like a Politician.
And disappear like a Magician.

~ Yup, they master the words of lying endearment and they master the disappearing act as well…
Awesome work!
Short and to the point!

[Jorj Jie]

So true Pax :) this is reel deal. I was so pissed I had to put it in writing :) LOL. oh well, it is what it is :).. Thanks for the review!

[Pax]

no probs ~ i do it all the time ~ when I'm down i write it ~ in that way i understand the feelings much better other than hurt them with my words ~ but in this case wala tayong magawa nan dyan na yan... other than going pissed all the time ~ we should take this as a learning process then move on diba :)

[Jorj Jie]

agree! :) ... charge it to experience na lang. hehe

[Pax]

oh... i know that motto very well... ;)

[Ency Bearis]

True its write....there are so me of them. Great concept.

[Jorj Jie]

:) thank you Ency!

[Ency Bearis]

I was in hurry and typed my comments I did not realized something wrong with,. -- I mean - True to its write .... there are many of them. Anyways, you're welcome.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

lol :) this speaks the truth... I knew a lot of people like this lol :) and it is frustrating to ask them to return the money they had barrowed. Great write. :)

[Jorj Jie]

yes. and we get that awkward feeling of asking them to return what they borrowed. hate ko tlga ang maningil super nahihiya ako. and so i just wait up until they remember me.lol!

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Trust di yan sila affected, parang wala lang, kung sisingilin mo magagalit pa, kayhirap magpahiram it even affects your friendship.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

I mean trust me heheh

[Jorj Jie]

oo nga eh, buti na lang madami pala akong karamay dito. heheh :) at least di ako nag iisa :)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

lol hahah oo tama ka dyan, lahat ng tao naka experience ng ganyan, nainis nga ako makikita mo, kumakain sa mga magagandang resto, may Ipad, Iphone pero ang utang di mabayaran mainis ka talaga. :( kaya tinangap ko na lang di talaga ako babayaran. Donation ko na yun pag tsugi sya. lol

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Sa instagram pa at facebook naka post ang mga kain kain bili ng kung ano ano. pero ang utang naka baon sa limot.