Goodbye Tears

Saying goodbye to some you love is so very hard to do, you feel the pain as the words are falling from your lips.

When there is nothing more say,
Tears say goodbye to our heaven,
And leave the shadow of today,
Sink into darker images exploding.

The tragic prize of a broken heart,
Sends messages through the air,
When everything has fallen apart,
Tears engage the waiting atmosphere.

And haunt the staring eyes,
Foamed in fire and feelings,
To make the skin shiver with fear,
As tears fall they crush everything.

Yet inside opportunity demands,
More inseparable chiming of sequence,
Finds the attraction of emotions,
A hurtful truth brush with chance.

Crush in the parade on fading view,
Tears stimulate angels in heaven,
To see the hurt and come to our rescue,
A guardian when we need a friend.

Reviews

[KWP]

and isn't it lovely to know that the universe will always look after us - the trick for us though is to experience the emotions, accept them and let go ...

you write with beautiful imagery X

[zunie frost]

this is really good !!!! i really love the last stanza
thank you so much for sharing it ... 90 point from me !!!!
keep it up

[Willard Wells]

Friends come and go, but the pain for each one is near the same. Nice words. Thanks,