Heaven"s Angel

Do I need an angel?.... Yes I do.

Your beautiful,

expectant eyes

sparkle

with a fairytale romance,

captured by a breathless smile.

 

More than a dream,

My affections my seem,

but all of the earth's

flowers,

cannot hold the heart's

powers.

 

I bow my head

in realization,

you must be heaven's angel.

 

Knowing your endless embrace

constantly telling me

our

love is eternal.

Reviews

[Apple]

this is great! Dont stop your awsome writing! :)

[Olivia Ashley]

This is really good!!

[A Wanderer of Dreams]

I've written a poem about a past love being my angel but it was not as sweet as yours. Every bit of this poem is sweet, soft, and captivating. This describes a type of love every person dreams of and hopes to experience even if just briefly.

[Jane Doe]

I absolutly adoree the last verse
ahhh just like in fairytales n dreams (tsk tsk domo)
my big brother doesnt believe in love we disagree no not my real brother but he is just like one

most on here r my siblings once you get to kno me i consider tham my siblings so yea

and thats wonderful you know how to cook n sport
go football n fieldhockey n softball n soccer n cheer leading
Redskins n Patriotsn Dimonds n Raidors n I cheer for patriots as well as feildhockey

-ajm

100/100

[Sasha]

This is beautiful. It started with fantastic imagery that wasn't too descriptive, but descriptive enough. The second stanza was my favorite and I appreciated the bits of rhyme scattered throughout.

[Sara Mercury]

A poem describing one's soul mate. Cool...