Writer's Block

Sir, would you please let me cross

this bridge of inspiration?

I'm stuck over here ,

Kicking up pebbles and dirt.

My mind needs to be released from this

platinum prison.

I can easily see the other side

of this heavenly bridge.

You can not hide its great beauty.

Overflowing with happy thoughts and ideas.

Ideas.

Oh, what I wouldn't do for them.

Please sir,

Please!

Let me cross this bridge!

Author's Note

Another poem on writer's block. I gotta get rid of this awful disease!

Reviews

[Moonflower]

The feeling is very well portrayed in this piece, Well done.

[Lemontine]

Wow! What a creative way to deal with writers block! I you actually let your writers block inspire you, which most writers can't do, or haven't thought of doing! The way you did it was really cool! Nice job!

[SamBug]

A feeling we all get sometimes. Great job expressing it though. You put in words what most of us couldn't when our writing juice is blocked

[Vanessa Rico]

For someone with writer's block, you have crafted quite an imaginative poem! I hear you...and feel your frustration at writer's block. It happens to everyone, when you just cant find those right words to put on paper.

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

I feel for you. Writer's block is awful! Just keep trying! This poem is a good start!

[Searching 4 Serenity]

Well, keep it up. No one deserves to be left out no matter what our differences are between each other

[Aurora Lynn]

This was a very well written poem! I happen to have writers block as well, so hopefully we can both get rid of it soon!
~Aurora

[Tasha]

you are so right. i loved this, its a very hard disease to break but you did a good job.