Silent Murder

Blood was everywhere...

I quietly tiptoed down the street, stalking his every move. He walked in zigzag patterns to try and confuse me, but I had already outsmarted him. He was my number one enemy, I couldn’t stand him. He would always annoy me wherever I went. It was time for revenge.

I grabbed a large sharp rock from the sidewalk, and got ready to aim. FIRE!!! I chucked the stone at him, and he collapsed without a sound. I had cleanly sliced him in half. Blood poured out onto the sidewalk, creating a nasty crime scene. His lifeless body jerked and twitched a couple times, before finally settling down to death. I didn’t feel bad inside, even though I was a murderer.

 

Stupid ant…

Author's Note

Just an little idea I had :)

Reviews

[Cal]

HeeHee awesome. I was like O_o you sliced him in half? Oh its an ant. I really like this, Its short but funny.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Hehe, what a twist, the suspense was awesome leading upto it, stunning :)

[Dark Angel ~]

Lol... wow, not quite what I expected... but that's what made it great! xD lol, i thought you killed a person

[Callista-Jade]

That was really creative! =)

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good poem. Poor ants can drive us nuts. Some ants can attack. Be careful. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Tasha]

I liked it a lot, it was different but really good.
♥ Ta'Shandra