World of Splendor

Surround me now 

with vibrant splendor.

World anew will

hold me under.

Well I seek 

like sharpest thunder

will renew

my world with wonder.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

very interesting wording and really appropriate rhyme that moves the poem with a subtle rhythm..

i feel that which is around me, needs some attention, some notice.
thanks for this.

jacob

[Botania]

You're welcome. Appreciate your review.