Cataclysmic Cosmic Dance

Among the stars

you offer me

your arm

so we

may dance

it seems.

Galaxies

peruse,

collide,

line the tables

on the side.

Comets just go

whooshing by

as we dance

up in the sky.

Reviews

[free will]

Sounds very personal, hard to comment about, but I think it's really good though.

[Botania]

As a child I danced with others frequently. To hold, to feel, to experience someone else's sense of rhythm and timing...to compare them, think about them... dwell on the amazing ones! Some ppl dance very well. The difference is pronounced. The difference you have between people in something as simple as dancing is amazing. Might still be an excellent way to get to know people. I wish we danced more as a society. Big Bands before my time where ppl dressed up in pretty dresses and suits and went out to dance, appropriate, morally sound, yet romantic and full of possibility... hate that I missed those times. Seems it would be fun. Wish it could come back and be part of our culture again. I would dance with everyone, including you! haha

[free will]

Ok I'll grab my suit and we'll go dancing. Sounds like fun ha :)

[Botania]

:) would be sooo fun. haha.