A place, you

The curls of your hair tangle me

in your thoughts,

and never would I dream to take some scissors

or a blade, and cut my way free.

I'd take each flower of your mind 

and decorate my own,

I could not conjure a place more magnificent than you

Reviews

[. serah .]

~~ wow... the images in this poem are very unique and charming... ~~ i especially love "each flower of your mind"...

p.s. english is not my first language so i'm not sure but maybe "takes" is a typo and you meant "take"...

[gnarlym]

I didn't catch that typo, thank you! And thank you, thank you, I appreciate your kind words!

[. serah .]

~~ you're very welcome... ~~ you write beautifully... :)