A visit

A humble poem

I hear the waves roaring in my ear 

fogs and drops and storms and breeze

i bury my feet in the warm sand

and the tides carry my grief to another land

Reviews

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Lale ... grieving by the Sea is the best way to
feel the loss as the Tide comes in and later goes out.
A life well lived is a Legacy. truly, Pat

[Dave Brown]

that is an effective response to grief and looks to having been done in the perfect environment

[Lale]

tahnk you for your kind review

[Betty Hermelee]

This is a lovely metaphor you write, sorrowful, and at the same time sending your grief away, realizing that it is a destructive force. The imagery shows it all. This a a way of dealing with your grief. well done Lale.
Best, Betty

[Lale]

thank you so much, Betty.

[Betty Hermelee]

You’re very welcome!

[Chris Shaw]

There is no one way of dealing with grief. Everyone has to find their own way through it. I say go with whatever brings you a little relief from those overpowering waves that can knock you off your feet. Your "humble" poem is very relatable Lale.

Chris

[Lale]

I'm sorry it relates.
all the joy and peace dear Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

storms and breeze, the really bad times, the gentler times...
but if we plant our feet firmly we will get through the grief...and then swim among waves of new days...smiling.
j.

[Lale]

what a beautiful visual :)

[John the Baptist]

If it works, stay with it. And tell others who grieve about it.

[Lale]

i hope so. thank you for reading

[mattavelli]

Hello, Lale! :)
I enjoyed your poem. It is short and meaning. Thanks for sharing.

[Lale]

thank you so much