Spring

1st try

Good morning wish

Spring meant to say bloom

to the roots in our wounds

kissing away the pain

A rendez-vous

Once more as I wait

for the orange tree to bloom

so dark and foggy I barely see

Good night hope

Tis the season to be jolly

waterlilies will definitly bloom

a new beginning awaits

Author's Note

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c-5bMO4nMuk

Reviews

[S.zaynab.kamoonpury]

Each verse/ stanza written in exquisite soulful touches of expression and imagery. Kudos for this lovely poem!

Plz do read and comment my newest poem too, right on top of my page.

[Lale]

thank you so much for reading.
I surely will do.

[Chris Shaw]

I have come back for a second read Lale. I so enjoyed your efforts here. Each stand alone delightfully constructed, visual and left its nark with this reader. I hope you pen some more.

Chris

[Lale]

It's always -always- a pleasure reading your reviews. Thank you so much!
i lack inspiration. I hope i find my way back soon.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I agree with Betty...stand alone but also tell a nice story put together....

well done.

Kissing away the pain.....that feels so good.
j.

[Lale]

Thank you so much.

[Betty Hermelee]

I love your Haiku studies; they could easily stand alone or they could be a lovely set, very descriptive, images of pain, blossoming, roots, wounds and new beginnings....just kiss away the pain...beautiful....
Thanks for sharing.
Yours,
B

[Lale]

Thank you Betty for this lovely review. It feels good to receive all this positive feedback. Thank you.

[Betty Hermelee]

You deserve it, stay well,
Betty

[Chris Shaw]

There is beauty in brevity. Each little poem is full of imagery. Thank you for water lilies, I just love their grace floating on the surface of water.

Chris

[Lale]

Thank you for this beautiful review.
I love waterlilies too.

[Coyote Poetry]

All three poems were beautiful. I love the days of Spring. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry for the days of Spring.
Coyote

[Lale]

Mission accomplished then! :))
You're welcome.Thank YOU for reading.

[Coyote Poetry]

You did well and you are welcome my friend.