One Sentance

This is for the one sentance contest.

The silence wraps around me like a cloak, choking me, smothering me as its spindly fingers drag me down, deep into the blackness. 

Reviews

[The Nameless]

I love the simile and the adjectives - you paint a picture with words. This is what writing is all about.

You could have given it a better title to make people want to read it.
Something interesting that draws the reader to the poem.

And also, according to my knowledge, it's "sentence" and not "sentance"

Hope this helped

All the best, continue with your great writing =D

[Archia]

That's ominous, it has that touch to it. I loved the picture that came to my mind, even though it was said in so few words.