16.Revisit love

Poem n video by pal. You fall in love; Fall out of it at times;Matter of heart truly; Not for minds play.

 

Revisit love

 

You fall in love

Fall out of it at times

Matter of heart truly

Not for minds play

 

Lucky are the ones

Live through love

Crossing many miles

Supporting each other

 

Loving the ones

In blood relation

The strongest binding

Part of creation plan

 

 Partners join along

But when there is love

Every meeting is lively

Bring more meaning to life

 

Friend’s love stays longer

Stronger than all others

For friendship builds

On mutual freedom

 

Personal space

Allows each one

Free minds choice

No clash or trespass

 

Margins the space

Allowed everywhere

For the will of others

Life is coexistence

 

All fail on margins

Trespass each time every time

Hurting One and all

Breaking relations

 

Visit your love again

This time don’t

Magnify others faults

Cause it’s their margin

 

Pal

Poem n video by pal

32.Revisit love

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s1khMayDqRQ

Poem by pal. Translation n video by Marina, Russia

38.Re-visit love (Возвращение к любви) - in Ruski 

 

Poem by pal. Translation by Plamena n video by kamelia, Bulgaria

33.Re-visit love (Преоткрий любовта) - in Bulgarski 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GlfBSZTnNtc

 

Reviews

[Helen Woodward]

I've always thought that there are two sides to every story and that personal space is extremely important in a relationship...especially in the bathroom! You have crafted this beautifully and truthfully. All the problem areas are covered.
"Lucky are the ones...live through love" This needs a connecting word like; who or that...
Terrific work...Cheers.

[James Watts]

Love can be a cruel and heartless entity. On the other hand, it can be rewarding and fulfilling. Relationships can be tricky and only those with true heart, dedication and patience seem to be able to hold onto it. Very nice piece thank you for sharing.

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

Good advise, well written. Debileah

[Ken Simm.]

True and very well written Ken.