45.My big brother

Breaks the tender hearts; Rips-in rage-things apart, Odd one out, he is, 'Think not', he prefers.

 

My Big Brother

 

 

M y big brother

 

 

Y ells and casts his spells

 

 

B ullies the younger ones and always

 

I ndiffierent to feelings of others in the family

 

G reat and good, he feels

 

 

B reaks the tender hearts

 

R ips, in rage, things apart

 

O dd one out, he is

 

T hink not, he fears

 

H igher to himself, none he cares

 

E go is all, he preserves

 

R epells all, yet remains mother's pet

 

 

Pal

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Acrostic, my first one

Reviews

[Pj]

Wow! So much hatred, but in a seemingly playful way due to the colours...the contrast was baffling, but in a great way. It made me read through the poem again to find the messages...that beneath the image you see, there is yet another image of him...maybe jealousy overrides reason? I Like this very much!

[ProphetsMother]

Yo how'd you know all this it's like you took a page from the Good Book. It is Cain or Able right? Anyways this is dope.

[Kees Kapteyn]

finally an artful acrostic! a lot of resentment towards your brother here, but seemingly rightfully so with all his tantrums and haughtiness!

[Angel Bird]

I never wrote an acrostic, so I think this one is really good, though it is sad, but unfortunately it happens very often. Made me think of the movie with James Dean "East of Eden".

Well done.

[Victoria Lee~]

wow... this is quite profound! Excellent, albiet heartbreaking write.. Hugs to you!