A sad situation

Such a solemn sovreignty
a country courting commonry
a beulah of battle bulls
a false fatherland of fools
Make port in our place of poppycock
our supercilious station swollen
Well thats what you get when your governement is run
by a Dick, a Bush, and a Colon

Reviews

[Althea Tremaine]

Some things never change...

You're a great writer.

However, you need to remember your form, as someone says in your comments. Give it a little bit of shape, and it will be fabulous.

[M. Amphet Salt]

I totally agree with you this a very fun poem. Ok, one thing; form, form, form, structure, structure.... I am confused to whether if its prose or poem. I know that its a poem and it is a good write, would be perfect with structure... Good Job.

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LOL thats great. Fabulous. And I totally agree!

[The Autumn Faerie]

I wholly agree...
*sigh*
How ever did we come to elect such imbeciles?