Past changed me…

Love and emotions changes everyone

I was a person who loves

I never thought of any shrubs

I know this much is true

I loved the one who was new

 

But things have to change

He ruined my life

And destroyed all my sage

 

Past changed me a lot

And then the thoughts of love

Never came in my wounds…

 

I hurted

I lied

I hated

I died

I ruined my life

For the things I did

Never got hide

 

Mornings become hell

Nights become heaven

Because I was living

Only to cry…

The days seemed to be longer

In the changing era of past to present

 

I cried for those who never loved me

I tried for those who never deserved

Now

I lied to those who always loved me

I hide to those who always listened me

 

That's how all changed

I was a good person

And it all hazed

 

Past changed me a lot

And then the thoughts of love

Never came in my wounds...

Author's Note

One of my works in which i showed how a person changes automatically when everything went wrong....
i hope u all will like it...

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A wise person learn from the gain and loss of love. I believe many kinds of love. Love for family and friends is so different when we give all to someone. Poem is very good. I could feel the struggle to understand and how love can twist-up a life.
A excellent poem.
Coyote

[JENY]

Bitter experience…
Always leave lasting wounds…
But wounds should be healed….
Otherwise….the change that occurred in your life is not a positive change…
Lol….your poem touched my heart….

[Akshat♥]

this is another piece of undergoing a struggle ..nice written:)

[al25]

Its very nicely written Very emotional. And the setup you've got going works wll for your peom. Enjoyed reading this.

[Cynthia]

It's so good! Past do changes people.

[Ashley]

its flows well and the words depict the emotion well. there are some grammar problems which you will find if you read through it thouroughly. but otherwise another good poem

[Cassiopia Summers]

I love it, not like it love it. (: It's really good.

[x]

Reading this, I didn't always get what you were trying to say but I appreciate the general sentiment. Some unusual lines here which just goes to show, there is always a new way of expressing something and whose to say one way or another is the only way.

Thank you for your effort here.

[Richard Williams]

A good effort with heartfelt expression but needs work with lines such as, "Never got hide" and, "And it all hazed". Keep on writing, taking your unbridled feelings and working them into poetic thought with clearer phrasing. Be clear to the reader; don't hide too far away.

[Bhavya Kaushik]

This was a very intriguing and personal piece you have shared here. I liked the rawness and intensity of this piece a lot, Great work here :)
Keep this work going!