nested

love showed everything

He is the one who makes me smile,

He is the one who lends me crying,

He is the one whom I love,

He is the one whom I trust,

He is the one without him I'm

Nothing

Lacking

Tracking

Breaking

And he is the one in whose love

I'm nesting…

 

Nested in his love

Doping in his eyes

Making in his smile

Laughing in his words

And trying in his thoughts…

 

Waking up and smiling

 Picking up and crying

 

He is the only one who

Has the charm

Of making me smile

And of carrying in his arms …

 

I'm nested in his love

Love which brings everything to me

Love which showed a caring feeling for me...

 

Author's Note

Another piece ,sharing my feelings.
Please do comment!!!!!!

Reviews

[Robin]

sweet sentiment

[Ice Queen of the Vampir..]

This is a very nice piece. Wonderfully written, beautiful job!!!

Heather

[Akshat♥]

that's a good poem.when i read it ...it makes me revolve around it..."doping into his eyes" is a nice line used:)

[Senseless whatever]

GOOD WRITE. loaded with feeling that go up up up then dip and go up again. Good compelling write.

[ScarlettTheDreamer]

Good poem with a huge load of emotions! love it!

[al25]

This is really great. Love the setup and the wording used. The whole poem flows so well. Really enjoyed reading this.

[Cassiopia Summers]

Very sincere. You can feel the raw emotion of it, and that's what makes it good.

[Richard Williams]

Sincere and unabashed emotion, good job.

[Candylove.]

Very interesting word choice, i enjoyed reading this piece. Yeah, I agree with Kristy Lee, I want One too. haha Anyways, this is great! Thanks for sharing your love with us. :)

[Kirsty Lee]

I loved it. It makes me want one, really bad.