Hold me in Your Arms

I love you

Closeness of love can be seen

Through our hearts

Trueness of love can be shown

Through our eyes

 Gentleness of love can be drawn

Through our touch

 

Darling,

Hold me in your Arms

To hear the whispers of your heart

To see the restlessness in your eyes

To feel the pragmatism of your touch

 

My love for you is too strong

Which I'm holding for so long

Things you see has been changed

For you which never laid

 

I just want your love

Hold me like a dove

Show the tenderness

Of your heart

Loving me like

Caring your heart.

Author's Note

All sort of comments are welcomed....

Reviews

[Berto]

Honestly, this poem seems a little rushed. I've read some of your other writing and it's very thoroughly expressed. This one seems like you've just used your flair with words to try to write a thought you haven't fully developed yet.

[David W Moore III]

Very tender. A beautiful piece from your heart c

[Daydreamer54]

aw a very sweet write! :)

[RJM]

Lot's of heartfelt emotions! Very nice

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

very beautiful~ you poured a lot of heart into your poem~