My life

One of my poems which i wrote only to describe my intense feelings...:)

My life has different colors

With the one that always cared

It has the trueness of honesty

With the one that always flared

It has its own fragrance

With the one that always shared

It has meaning of ambiance

With the one that always faired

 

Its something that can't be described

But it has something that can be visualize

 

I have no words to show its happiness

It seemed of something  that have no

CURVES

 

But my life never stands

Free of scratches

But still my life holds

Many of its branches…

Author's Note

I would love it if you review it with your words.
From many days i have left writing and now again will start for regular intervals with a promise to renew my thoughts with different topics.

Reviews

[Sarah J. Kelleher]

Firstly, I have to say... the blue cursive font threw me off and made it hard to focus on the poem itself... I have trouble focusing anyway, but I had to go back and read many of the lines over again. Oh oh! End of the second stanza... Did you mean "visualized"? Also in the third stanza, second line... I think you might have meant "has" instead of "have". As for the poem itself, I like the feel of it. I think the very first line kind of leads the reader away, perhaps substituting the word "colors" with "branches", like at the end? The word colors threw me off a bit is all. I really like this piece overall, it was quite well-written.

[Akshat♥]

very creative...last stanza is remarkable well said..
words like flared,ambiance are nicely used here...
life is not that easy to go through it ..
keep going forward in life and be strong..
nice concept...

[Misty Blue Eyes]

this is an interesting poem i love the last stanza..very awesome

[Coyote Poetry]

A very strong poem. I like the logic in your words. We may get beaten down and get tire. But we stay strong and hold on to the parts needed to keep going forward. I like how you use nature to make your point. A outstanding poem. I like the ending lines a lot.
Coyote

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

a beautifully crafted poem in subtle branchings~