Emptiness of Heart

Trying to sum up myself after all the scratches...

Life without you seems to end up

Seeing the way it was before

The emptiness of my heart lighten up

When it was YOU in front of my eyes

 

The arms which heal my wounds

Has something to say which is

Still somewhere left unspoken

 

The bed which held me close to you

Has something to show which is

Still somewhere hid

 

The place which gave me solace

Has something to spread which is

Still somewhere untouched

 

Life is having its own color

But without you

Life is no where in power

 

Having you in my heart

Is deep down - a pain

Which cannot be secluded

By you ever again

 

Emptiness of my heart

Is not shown to you

But holding it tight

So never to fill it AGAIN...

Author's Note

This was just another way to pull out my emotions to make myself calm and contend without any means of crying...

Reviews

[abhas]

its hard to contemplate a loss of love... it makes us walk life without feet... makes us colder outside with all those emotions running riots and needling through walls of the heart... but well as the wise men say we must leave it too time... nice write... the depth of emotions were great...... hope things turn our alright...

[Bhavya Kaushik]

Lavina, that was very beautifully written. It is like coming of a new phase in your writing. Very poetic indeed!

[al25]

Lots of strong emotions here. good job.

[cfix]

Wow, this is such an emotional write here, i can feel this tugging. I liked your last stanza the best it's teh one that tugged for me. I can feel this. Very nicely written.

[serpent]

walls of love painted with the black color of heartbreak....
the void created by loss of love is powerful enough to consume a lot of emotions.
brilliat piece!

[JENY]

Fantastic….
Absence of lover…
And the pain ensuing it…..
Authentic..and candid expressions….
Very touching…

[Richard Williams]

The feelings flow out in sadness and sincerity.

[Uniqe In Many Ways]

That was amazing!!! i love this one!! so going in my favorites!!!

[Hopless]

omy this oi excatly how im feeeling right noww!!

[Sarah J. Kelleher]

Beautiful piece, very well written. Writing poetry really does give us solace from the emotions we carry. :)