Wishing on a star

 

                         Wishing on a star

                                 Will there ever be a wish upon a star

    That which came true for you

    A small wish on ashooting star

     That shines as bright for you

           You sing your songs

                I wish i may

              I wish i might

                                     Can this wish come true tonight

                                   The star that falls for you to see

                                  May be the person you want to see

                 The person you see helps you make true the wish for you to choose

   After the years your back

                          To wish on the star over and over again

Reviews

[theunknownchick]

I find this poem enjoyable and amazing. I like the structure and the flow and the idea of the poem. Its very beautiful... beautiful:P Great Job =D

[cquig]

I really like this poem. I like the way you presented it and I like the way it flowed. It was musical to me.