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a cold dark night your all alone you sound then all is lost...

one dark night you are walking alone in the woods you hear a twig snap,you speed you,hear it louder,you speed up more then you are face to face with a figuere you walk closer then a screm. Then silance...  

Author's Note

this is my first one so be nice!

Reviews

[shan]

i really like your story heather can't wait to see more

[KittyVenus]

A few capital letter mistakes, and spelling mistakes, punctuation too. Over all its good, can't wait to see more!