Confusion

I just don't know

Which way I want to go

Please lend me a hand

For I don't know where I stand

And my confusion will only grow

Reviews

[Light]

What I love the most about this is its simplicity, how most poems and stories use long, dreary explanations with overcomplicated details to describe the writer's message. But here, you accomplished the same feat with a mere five-line rhyme.
Amazing work and thank you for sharing this.

[GPR]

Thank you :D

[....................]

welcome to a very large club, my friend :) .... you've written something we've all felt at some point in time...unfortunately the solution isn't an easy one because it has to come from within... nicely-done

[GPR]

Thank you :)

[Kajal Sharma]

short sweet and simple .....very well written

[GPR]

Thank you :)

[Elodie Thompson]

What a wonderful way to explain something. Your style of poetry is very simple yet it contains a message that one can often relate to. Good job.

[GPR]

Thank you :)

[Elodie Thompson]

No worries.