Narrow Path

Life has many difficulties. Sometimes you loose and sometimes you win. But whatever circumstances it be, just always believe in yourself. Believe that someday, you'll get through all of these.

    

  Narrow path   

 

                     Scared to cross on a winding road,

                     Like no one cares for you to hold,

                     A path that takes you all the way,

                     Just hold on dear, I know you’ll stay.

 

                     You may have walked in here alone,

                     Feeling afraid with all confusion,

                     Then you chased away the fear,

                     And in the end he shed a tear.

 

                     You’re at the edge of a morning glare,

                     A sunny smile is now at stare,

                     The wind of hope in you caress,

                     To know that life is just a test.

 

Author's Note

Some of the grammars maybe are not good.

Reviews

[Raven Wyntermoon]

This is a good poem for encouragement.
Although, I am curious to know who is the "he" in your poem?
Is "he" a religious figure, a symbol of life or an actual significant person?

Favorite Line: A sunny smile is now at stare
That is a comforting image.

[Gracee Amores]

Hi! Thank you for your comment. Regarding that "he" actually, it goes into a general way,but as I was writing it, I refer it to somebody a guy in particular. I am thinking of a person who is experiencing a deep and dim moment in his life :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree Gracee.
"The wind of hope in you caress,
To know that life is just a test."
We shall be tested daily and can give-in or give-up. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Gracee Amores]

Thank you again for appreciating my poetry. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.

[Jade]

very well written I like this, every line is wonderful. you hold wonderful tempo with your words, they flow very well

[Gracee Amores]

Thank you very much. I'm grateful you liked it :)

[Gee]

Yep, there's always a light at the tunnels end. A nice wee poem

[Gracee Amores]

Thank you! :)