breath

 Breath

Breathe deep

meditate

body torn asunder

fragmented by too many burdens

 

Breathe deep

my heart races

mind agitates

running backwards

here, there, nowhere

 

Breathe deep

commitments overwhelm

pulse races

incidents to befall

 

Breathe deep

yoga positions

soft gong music

Namaste

Reviews

[Perdition]

Well, that was quick..lol. Taking the rhythm and punch in every line, I find a strange, creative wandering on a path that seems to breathe wherever it needs, finds its home in a soothing kind and somewhat hovering pace...in other words, well done and then some~

[Grace Lee]

you are always on point

[Paul Michael Kelly]

I find this compact and concise. Very relatable. A short journey, moving through states as you bring yourself back towards wholeness. Namaste indeed....

[Titilayo Sarah Eguridu]

This captures the frenetic nature of most human lives.
Life’s carousel of activities never stops, but we must be intentional about catching our breath from time to time.

[Grace Lee]

So thoughtful

[Buddhistboy73]

Ah the breath......

Nature's antidote to the strains of modern life.......:)

So you meditate? Namaste to you my friend....

Only by accepting and finding peace in ourselves can we find true happiness in life...

BB73

[Grace Lee]

meditation is key to doors unseen

[Kenneth The Poet]

This makes me want to get up and exercise.

[Grace Lee]

hahaha that'll be very good