This is so deep and thoughtful!
Though I loved the entire piece but I liked the closing lines the most, they concluded the entire poem so beautifully...
Great work :)
El Segundo ( formerll lived in LA....i miss it!), CA
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ummmmmmmmmmmmmmm~~~~ haha i dont really know what to write! I am 16 and have wanted to post my poems online for a long time. I dont care if anyone reads them or thinks they're good or anything, but i .. more..