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A Poem by Rachel DeHart

A poem for Albert's Poetry Cafe ~ Advanced 10/40 words with Tovli !

My lungs fill with her perfume,
the splendid presence of her with me
in oblivion, something purer than the cleanest
glass, more beautiful than the sky. Only
with her am I serene, when her two merciful eyes
stare into mine.

© 2008 Rachel DeHart

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Tovli

a fantastic poem--great flow and consistency using the ten words. tovli

Posted 17 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

emmajoy

Oh this flows so smoothly and beautifully. What a fine use of the given words and maximum forty. Good luck

Posted 17 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Helena

Beautiful little poem with wonderful use of the 10/40.
Lovely sentiments and well penned.

Helena

Posted 17 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MagicHearted Knight

The simple, sweet, elegent innocence of this poem, bring a hushed and comforting contentment to my heart and quietude to my very sense of being

Posted 17 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on August 6, 2008

Author

Rachel DeHart

Falls Church, VA

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