my luv 4 justin

my luv fore justin

by:mackeznie

my luv 4 justin ,

i luv him !!

its so much ,

that wen im in Skl n the Teacher is tlkin ,

i dnt here her ,

jst think of him drawin <3's on my notes !!

id b a gud wife 4 him ,

evry tym i was dustin ,

my house for justin,

i wud be bustin,

a rhyme at the same tym ,

of my luv 4 him !!

MY justin !!

Author's Note

this is my songg i want 2 sing it for justin bieber sumtimes i sing it in the shower let me no wat u think (: plz review nicely im new to this (:

Reviews

[Daniela May]

hey mackenzie :) i'm 15 in 9 days! yay! so were kinda the same age :) anyway, it's a cute poem and i used to love justin bieber too i must admit! his song Boyfriend, i couldn't help falling in love with! haha. anyway, i love that you're expressing your love of Justin and everything but it would be better if you typed it properly. i had to read it over and over to understand it! There's nothing wrong with text speak or spelling errors but when you write a whole poem like that i find it a bit strange. maybe it's just me though! i mean i type like that on facebook and stuff but i think on writerscafe maybe you should stick to proper typing :) don't take that as bad though i loved the poem! xx