Lost

A Poem by M.K. Jawdat

How hard it becomes sometimes
To express
Lost
In the swirls of uncertainty

Foggy visioned eyes
Searching for a sign
Of sanity
In the preview
Of nonplussed emotions

As it flies by
Angel of desires
Hard we strive
To touch it's wings
But leaves us wondering
Alone
On the threshold of life

© 2014 M.K. Jawdat

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Lily Finch

Really so true......well penned....lovely...

Posted 10 Years Ago

Thomas Skahill

I like the slant rhyme of eyes and sign you use in the second stanza and the word choice of "nonplussed". I thought it was really unique, maybe expand on it a little bit more!

Posted 11 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

thank you ......

Zahra

In the preview
of nonplussed emotions.
Interesting

Posted 11 Years Ago

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Added on March 21, 2014
Last Updated on March 21, 2014

Author

M.K. Jawdat

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Not much to say about me. 1. I like to write for fun, practice and clearing my mind. I write with the pen name that is my wc name as well. 2. I appreciate reviews and critique. 3. I dislike rude.. more..