Ennui

it isn't just starting,

it already has.

right in front of my 

silly blind eyes.

that's the last time

i leave my mind

alone, to evade 

and fantasize.

my thoughts won't 

sleep, my body won't

ease, when the moon 

is high in it's reign.

so i spend my hours

of darkness alone,

unbecoming and

going insane

Reviews

[Pete]

this is so cool & creative. great, powerful title that catches and relates so much as it draws you in. the wording and imagery are perfectly effective for that all encompassing feeling of dissatisfaction. powerful ending nails it. :)

[grey.eyes]

thank you so much!

[Tony Jordan]

I took this to be a moon fascination or metaphorical moon to mean PMS - either way it conveys that frustration of ennui very well.

[grey.eyes]

thank you for your time :)

[David R Gonzalez]

The title for this is perfect. your words perfectly capture the emotion of Ennui. Great job!

[grey.eyes]

thank you so much!