Poison Heir

A Book by Grimmmes

In a Dystopian future, a young girl lives a trapped life inside the air purifier's radius. When she is forced to flee her village she realises that she is able to breathe in the toxic air outside...

Chapters

Chapter One

© 2016 Grimmmes

Author's Note

Hi everyone,

I have a number of chapters already completed, but still waiting for me to edit! I'll be posting them soon :)

Just looking for feedback regarding my writing style. My target audience will most likely been teens and I'm wondering whether my writing is too flowery?

Also - is the start a little cliché of the Dystopian genre? Or just teen plots in general, with the whole 'I'm in trouble with mum because I don't understand the meaning of responsibility' kinda protagonist?

Feedback is totally welcomed! I'm looking to get this published one day and would really appreciate any comments/criticism.

Thanks!

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Added on March 28, 2016
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Grimmmes

Sydney, Australia

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